Rate this verse out of 10?rap hip hop?

I sorry but i cant tell you what you want to hear. it wasnt all that , you started of strong but went weak . one reason is beacuse you dont always have to ryhme you can just say what you feel and if you have the talent ( which i think you do) you can peice it all together like an artist. But other than that that you did pretty good. And also when you write dont let others enfuluence you, just write what you feel.